250 words 4 paragraphs 13sentences topic-vocabulary

40min

Planning:10 minutes

1.Introduction - 2 sentences  5min

2.two main paragraphs - 5 sentences each(可变) 10min

3.conclusion - 1 sentence 5min(include checking time)

Four types of question:

discussion

opinion

problem and solution

two-part question

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Introduction(topic+answer)

2 sentences

-introduce the topic

-give a general answer

Discussion

People have different views about the effectiveness of group stduy as opposed to working alone.

While there are some benefits to studying independently,I believe that group work is usually more productive.

has become commonplace (widespread) in recent years.while i understand that critics may see this as ...,i believe ..more benefits than drawbacks

weighed up the pros and cons

contribute to state school through taxes

for a range of reason

Opinion

To what extent do you agree or disagree(写自己的看法)

It's sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in their local communities.I completely agree that this kind of scheme would be a good idea.(In my opinion,it would be wrong to force teenagers to do any kind of unsalaried work.)

Problem and solution

It's true that punishments do not always deter criminals from committing more crimes.There are various reasons why offenders repeatedly break the law,but governments could certainly take steps to address(mitigate/tackle) this issue.

Two-part question

Work plays a central role in our lives, and we would all like to feel fulfilled professionally.While a variety of factors may lead to job satisfaction, it would be unrealistic to expect everyone to be happy at work.

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Main paragraph

Firstly,Secondly,Finally(不止有一个想法，如 (dis)advantages,problems,solutions))

There're several reasons why i would argue against having compulsory community service for secondary school student.Firstly(First of all), the school curriculum is already full with important academic subjects, such as maths, science and languages.For example(instance), I remember having an extremely busy timetable when i was at high school, and it would not have been possible to add to it. Secondly, students' performance in other subjects would be affected if valuable study time were taken by charity work or neighbourhood improvement schemes. Finally(Last but not least), I believe that teenage students would be reluctant to take part in any programme of obligatory work, and this could lead to poor motivation and even bad behaviour.

Idea,Explain,Example(one idea; a reason; an opinion)

On the other hand, the opportunity to do voluntary community service could be extremely positive for high school students. By making these programmes optional, schools would ensure that only motivated students took part. These young people would gain valuable experience in an adlut working environment, which could help to build their self confidence and enhance their skills.  Having such experience and skills on their CVs could greatly improve school leavers' career prospects. For example, a period of voluntary work experience might impress a university admissions officer or a future employer.

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Conclusions-Paraphrase the answer that you gave in your introduction

- Paraphrasing to show variety

-never write anything new

-one sentence: repeat,summarise

Discussion(+opinion)

In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of using video security systems in public places do outweigh drawbacks  the disadvantages.

Opinion

In conclusion, i do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education.

Problem and solution

In conclusion,various measures can be taken to tackle the promblems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.

2-part question

In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and i believe that traditional music should given more importance than international music.

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Planing-3 steps

step 1 - read and understand the question (highlight key parts)

step 2 - plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)

step3 - plan ideas for the two main paragraphs (6 min)

brainstorm, note down any any ideas you have 

develop ideas in deatil

keep asking yourself 'why'

think of examples to support your ideas

try to group related ideas (number them)